Mar 19, 2009

Her mysterious death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstance and I was assigned to the case.
I had to do a lot of work on this case. There was no one who saw what had happen and if there was a person who saw what happen they were not speaking up. We found the dead girls body in the park on a very cold winter afternoon. She was under some snow but a park officer was walking by and saw a hand coming out the snow. We all went to the park because the department told us to hurry and get down there.

My name is John Payne and I been a detective for 3 years now. I worked on a lot of different cases. But I never seen a case like this I don’t have a lot to work with on this case because there has not been no one who has come forward and said anything. Which really makes my job a lot harder. But some how I will find this persons killer.

They check her body and they found that she had some bruises on her neck and on her hands. Which makes me believe that she was choked to death. But we still could not find who this girl was we had no way to find out what her name was or anything. Who ever she was she had done some drugs because we did a drug test on her and we found crack in her system. I started to think that she might be a run away from home so I called all the numbers that we had of missing girls and told the parents to come down.

We called at least 50 families in and all of them said that it was not there baby girl. But we still had a couple families left to come in and see the girl. We had this one family come in there name were the Hugo’s. They came in and started crying on the girl and said yes this is my daughter. I felt bad for them but I had to ask them a couple questions. They agreed to tell me everything I wanted to know.

We went into a private room and sat down. How old was your daughter Mr. Hugo? she was 17 when did she leave the house? She left in late November do you know why she left? She had this crazy boyfriend that told her to move in with him and she was in love with him so she ran away from home where does her boyfriend live at? He lives in some where in Lincoln park what’s his name? His name was Raul Sanchez.

I told them to go home and get some rest that if I knew anything new I call them to let them know they said thank you and left. Now I had some where to start from I look up this Raul Sanchez and went to his house. I sat down with him and ask him a couple questions on his girlfriend. He looked like a good kid. But ever good kid can always do something bad so I started my questions.

When’s the last time you saw your girl Gloria? A week ago we were outside drinking with some friends did she move in with you when she ran away from home? Yes she told me she was tried of her parents and she wanted to move in with me How long was she here for? She stayed with me for about a week and a half do you know if she did any drugs? Yea I mean she did it a couple times but owning in like parties and in special times do you know any one who ever had a big problem with Gloria? No she was easy going but she did tell me about this one guy named Miguel that kept telling her she loved her and she do anything to be with her.

So now I got to go find out who this Miguel kid is he told me he lived some where in brickyard. I went looking around there and for sure there he was at his house sitting on the pouch with his little gangbanging friends. I told him to come here but he said forget you piggy. Then I grab him by his shirt and throw him down to the floor. I told him now you listen here punk am not here to make problems I just need to ask you a couple questions fo sho then.

I took him to the police station and ask him a couple questions. When’s the last time you seen Gloria? Week ago at a party but she was with her boyfriend and I did not want to talk to her. Why do you love her? I was just saying that to see if I could get some but I was wrong.

Did you kill Gloria? NO! I like that girl I never do anything to hurt her like that my parents thought me better then to go around hitting girls I respect my woman. You little gang banger? Naw I just hag out with them because there my friend I meet all them when I was a little shorty because of my cousin Chris. Ok fine if I need to ask you any other questions am come looking for you. Wait before you go where was this party at? It was on Spalding and Barry.

So I went around asking people around there if they had seen Gloria some where around here. The neighbor the one that live next door to the people having the party said that yea she saw her at the party. She was dancing with this one guy and then the guy pulled her into a room after that I did not see her. How old was the guy about 17 then I showed him a picture of raul was this him? Yea that’s the guy he was dancing with her then they went in the room.

It was starting to look more and more like the killer had been Raul. But when I went to ask Raul he said yea we did go into the room but she was making me go to sleep because I was drunk and I could not move no more. After that she left the room and I woke up in the bed and she was no where to be found I thought maybe she just went home but she was not here so I thought maybe she went back to her dads house. I mean his dad was there to I saw him outside. Mr. Hugo was outside? Yea he was there I think he heard about the party and was going to try Gloria to go home and he was outside I guess waiting for her.

Ok now were going some where with this case. I went and called Mr. Hugo and ask him if he had seen Gloria at a party that was on Barry and Spalding. He told no I was never there I was at home wait and hoping she would come home. Now I knew he was lying to me because I remember his wife had told me that he went out drinking with his friends that night. I told him you would not be trying to hide anything from me Mr. Hugo now would you? No of cause not.

I knew he was lying right then and there. I made him come in and do some finger prints. I could be able to match the finger prints on the neck on the ones on his hands. If they match I know that his dad was the killer. I check and I went into the lab to check and I told him stay here I be right back. I got my hand cuffs ready and was about to arrest him it showed that he was the killer of Gloria but when I went back he had ran away. I chased after him.

But I could not catch up to him. I told the whole department if you see Mr. Hugo hand cuff him and take him to the police station he’s in a baby blue hummer. I went to tell miss Hugo that I knew who had killed her daughter. When I got there she was cooking I told her I don’t know how to tell you this but your husband is the killer. She started to cry and cry and I told her am sorry but your husband is the killer of your daughter and he’s going got go to jail for what he did.

We caught him when he ran out of gas of the car. We asked him why he killed her and this is what he said. I prefer her be dead then for her to be doing drugs and drinking and being with that guy Raul. So you killer your daughter so she wont do that? Yes and I would do it again that’s not my baby girl no more that was some other girl in her body.

We went to court and they gave him 15 years in jail. That poor little girl never thought her own dad would kill her. After a year miss Hugo got a divorce because she was scared of her husband. Then she got remarried to a guy named Eddie. That was the end of the story so hopefully the new husband she has turns out better then the last one.

1 comment:

  1. This sentence you wrote captures so much and creates a lot of imagery: "We found the dead girl's body in the park on a very cold winter afternoon."

    It is one of the best sentences and tells me what was found, where it was found, what season, and what time of year. This was great! That sentence could also be used as an effective lead for another story. Great job!

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