It was my best friends deepest darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. We were eating outside of the school it was lunch time. It was really warm this day and everyone was hot and sweating from there faces. Me and my best friend Chuy we playing soccer outside but then he told me that he needed to tell me something so we went and we sat down under a nice cool tree. Chuy come out and just told me Armando you know your my best friend right? and I was like yea I know Chuy and your my best friend. well I need to tell you something what do you need to tell me Chuy if I tell you can not go and tell no one. Okay I wont what’s wrong?
I got daisy pregnant! Man that sucks what you going to do about that. I don’t know but that’s not what am scared of right now. Then what’s wrong. Last night I went out on a date with daisy yea and what’s wrong with that. Nothing but wait we were at the lake and we were eat like a little picnic thing and well we were kissing and everything and then some guys came and they grab her. At first I tried to fight them off but they were to strong for me and they hit me in the face that why I got this bruise. I got knocked out and I remembered I was holding a gun that I got from my brother and I shot a guy and he fell and he died right there. then did not know what had happen to her at first I thought maybe they just were going to beat on me but then they took her. I did not know what to do and one guy tried to cut me with a knife but he missed and I throw it away.
But they took daisy with them and I don’t where she is and she did not come to school. Then her dad knows am going out with her and he called my crib and told me if I knew where she was because she did not come home all night long. I told him I did not know. But why would they want to take daisy she never does nothing bad she’s all good. Well am not going to hind anything but she sells dope so that she can make some money that other reason am scared what if she gets killed for that stupid reason. Can you help me Armando I need your help for this. No problem Chuy you know I always got your back no matter what.
So what are we going to do Chuy? Tell you the truth I don’t know yet but I can tell you this much you see that car right there. Yeah what about it they been there for about 20 minutes and they have not stopped looking at me and you Armando. Damn your right who do you think they are I don’t know but I say we move before something happens. What we going to do I don’t know but I hope the police don’t find out about the guy I killed. What did you do with the body? I throw it into the water but I don’t know how far it went. Chuy if I was you I be really careful because you don’t know what might happen because of the guy you shot down.
I don’t care what happens to me as long as daisy and my kid is okay then I have nothing to worry about. I Guess so but we still got to go find them first. When we got out of school I told Chuy for him to go and tell the police what had happen to see if they could find her but he said forget that they wont help at all. but that’s the owning thing that might really help naw forget that Armando we don’t got time for all that come to my house and we going to take my dads truck and we going to go looking for daisy. So we got to the house and has dad said that we could not take the car but like Chuy always does he did not care and took the car anyways.
We got on and we got to a red light then I looked back and the car that was looking at us was behind us so I told Chuy was like lets see if they will chase us. Then we were looking to see if they would follow us and they did start then we went to a dark alley and got out. The car and we got into a fight with the two guys for sure me and Chuy beat them down good. Chuy was really mad I have never seen him this mad before he pulled out a gun and I told him to put that thing away so he did. We beat on the guys until they told us we daisy was at. they told us they had her at a house on Barry. so me and Chuy got back in the car and hurried to the house to go get daisy.
We got there Chuy ran inside there were two men at the door but I don’t want go into Chuy but he did not care he shot them. they died right there he ran outside to go get daisy she was on a chair and she could not move. then he shot a guy that was in the kitchen. I don’t know what go into Chuy but I did not like it we got daisy and we ran home right away. Chuy killed four guys those two days and no one ever knew why they killed them or who had killed them. I promise never to tell anyone but Chuy is going crazy now to me he’s looking more and more like a killer that wants to kill again. Am deeply worried about him he’s not the same person he use to be he takes he’s gun everywhere he goes if. He don’t change I think am have to tell the police what happen. That was my friend Chuy's deepest secret that he had he had killed 4 guys with that one gun.
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Armando your story is very intersting I loved it it really nice awsome job
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Fluffy nice story is intersting good job
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Armando i like your story it has alot of action and killing for me is perfect good job armando
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