Apr 13, 2009

on the block

Some bang with a gun
Some die by the bullet
Some sit and cry scared to awake
Some stand and fight with a there might
We stand right on are block and die
We see are friends and family die
We look in the sky hoping and praying
You might stand and fight
Right on your block But at the ended we all die
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12 comments:

  1. JoseApril 13, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    NICE POEM ARMANDO
    BUT MAKE IT LONGER LOL

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  2. CruzApril 13, 2009 at 10:42 AM

    yea make it longer and i dont understand line 4 ok ok and fix it and it was good too

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  3. JessicaApril 13, 2009 at 11:07 AM

    DAMmM i likE
    yOUR POEM!!!
    yOU SNAPPED xD

    pEBBlESz

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  4. kleverApril 14, 2009 at 9:32 AM

    good poem longer

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  5. daliaApril 14, 2009 at 9:43 AM

    You shouls make it longer but its nice and now you scared me =]im going to sty inside for ever just playing great peom...

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  6. HONEyCOMBzApril 14, 2009 at 9:49 AM

    i AGREE WiT D PEOPlE DAt SAiD 2 MAkE iT lONGER!!
    iS GOOD flUFFy =] i LiKE iT =]

    -*HONEyCOMBz

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  7. LocoApril 14, 2009 at 9:55 AM

    Very nice man if you would make itlonger and put more detail it would be an awesome poem it is but it would be better..

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  8. luisApril 14, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    good story i liked it alot keepupthat good work man and all of your story's will be good.



    Luis

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  9. daliaApril 14, 2009 at 10:03 AM

    hahahhaaha no one said it was for jasmin lol jp and yes you could be my best friend to =] lol......

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  10. JAZMINEApril 14, 2009 at 10:27 AM

    MAN THAT IS TRUE!!! *BUT IT WAS A VERY GOOD I LIKE IT*

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  11. JackyApril 14, 2009 at 1:54 PM

    NiiC3 PO3M MANDO....
    ii AGR33 WiiT JESSy.. U SNAPP3D....LOL
    BUt H3Y ii THiiNK YOU M3NT WIT ALL THEIR MIGHT AND NOT WIT A THERE MIGHT...

    N-3 WAYz GOOd PO3M... =]

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  12. crystalApril 14, 2009 at 2:18 PM

    good job armando.

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